All Comments on 'The Horny Elves Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

You should make more. Maybe base it around Lisa tricking her mother into coming to the other world with her.

SonatatreSonatatrealmost 8 years agoAuthor
We will see

If there is a demand for it I might write a new story in the same universe. Right now I am not sure if I will do that, but there is certainly room for more stories in the future. I liked writing about this universe and I might need to write more after I have worked on some other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Mom gets "punished"

For chapter 5 you should have Lisa's mom get dominated and impregnated by the rude elf.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

i agree with the them both about getting lisa mother into it or about the progress of lisa preagants and telling her mother

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Bring the mother into it!

Let Lisa's Mom me the member of the group who spanks her! That would be so hot. Awesome chapter by the way.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Hope they visit the island the orcs were sent to.

Would be great if the orcs could be brought back in a peaceful way. Maybe out of respect for Lisa and what she did in the past.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
add sequel plz

sequel with lisa pregnant and aftermath some sticky n milky......😉

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You should bring the mom into it

Lisa's mom should get gangbanged by a bunch of "low class" elf thugs or something like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
My Vote

More horny elves, please!

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999about 5 years ago
This was a great story

I completely enjoyed it and how you were able to tie it all together. I understand your reluctance to add more chapters, but I would enjoy more, especially if Lisa's mother is brought into the story. Futa and incest is a great combination as far as I am concerned.

Lenny20Lenny20almost 5 years ago
Great

One of the best stories I ever read. So much emotion, also sexy and a great build-up from beginning to end. Loved it! Absolutely great work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Supper sad this is over it was a grate story

AlexieeeeAlexieeeeover 2 years ago

I wish there's more to thissss i loved ittt!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

pls bring more plsssss, I want to see them married and their kids, can't end it this way tbh

Sexy_LisaSexy_Lisaalmost 2 years ago

I have really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with all of us.... Hugs

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I am super horny rn

This is a good read

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