All Comments on 'The "Hot Sister" Folder'
by curlyspurs
- 33 Comments
dutch513about 11 years agovery good on the build up but lacking on the finish. It is a very good story but with a little work it would have been a great story. Hope you write more of this kind of story .
thanks for the read !
hornacekabout 11 years agoSomeone needs to learn more about cup sizes.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoEven more breath taking than your mother/son story this one absolutely demands to be continued. Thanks a Lot for the read.
Heinrich
LAROCabout 11 years agoHOT HOT HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....LAROC
ansdguyabout 11 years agoSis's tits are a 32B, then a 30B, then maybe a C cup? I was wondering how it was the sis never heard the camera's shutter release. He was certainly close enough. If his DSLR had a quiet release mode, you never mentioned it. The story itself was very cookie cutter. Not believable and passionless.
Sorry, my friend.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoStory was interesting, and requires a continuation. Not much errors in word usage or such. Very good!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoAt the beginning of the story bra size is stated as 32B, later on stated as 30B. Nice story, hot.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoOh to have a hot sis like this, I would fuck and suck her brains out every day for as long as possible. Cunt struck sex maniac uk.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoSomehow, the story seemed a phoney...UNTRUE.
Should I have been in his situation with all that potentual, I would have completed the act in a comfortable place where there could have been seconds and thirds.
It is almost as though the camera wrote the stupid script.
Biskitabout 11 years agoIt's ok that the story line is familiar, you had fun dialog and created exciting visuals to take away from the few story errors. I was hard and jerking off and that's all I look for in an erotic brother/sister incest story. Be your worst critic and in your next story keep improving and you'll have all of us cumming.
jpz007ahrenabout 11 years agoPerky and mountainous 32B. That size can be the first, but not really the latter, unless this guy usually prefers boys. I apologize, but this is actually the first hitch that actually stopped my finishing a story. Shame too, nice length, great narative at the start. There is a bra guide on this site, fyi: 26DD vs. 36B
Anonymousabout 11 years agoFirst off. Ignore the idiots to dumb to spell their comments correctly, as they aren't smart enough to critique. Secondly you did well, an editor is about all you need. The breasts thing before mentioned, one part you said his cock was buried but then said he was pulled in deeper, and chunky sperm? May wanna rethink that cause I'm pretty sure that's a sign of an STD. But overall liked it.
perigrinabout 11 years agoIt had a good beginning and the build up was fine... But the *ahem* climax was somehow lacking. Not bad mind you, just a bit lacking.
All in all? Certainly worthy of continuance.
daddygoesdeepabout 11 years agoKeep 'em cumming. My fat cock twitched all the way through the story.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoIt's:
Ignore the idiots "too" dumb to spell their comments correctly
Not:
Ignore the idiots "to" dumb to spell their comments correctly
Just saying ;-)
mottfanalmost 10 years agoHow did this story make me feel?
Horny, hard, then a mind blowing orgasm...and I'm not even into incest stories!
Your writing is superb. Thanks for the story and for getting me off.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoShit I've got such a raging hard on. I'd like to meet the sister in reality.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoIs there a part 2 i dont know about because there should be. FUCKIN HOT
naughtyandy4uover 5 years agoYou sure know how to build the anticipation of an erotic climax
