All Comments on 'The Hotel Penland'

I must admit this is the first story of this genre I've read and I really ejoyed it. I think it would have been better if the girl had met him back in the lobby, but what do I know? Keep writing.

not sure that was ur intention, but it was more an evil, ironic laugh with you rather than at u so please understand i did enjoy the story. the erotic side was bit meh but maybe coz its only a 2page piece of writing. keep it up :)