All Comments on 'The Hotel Room'

Well done, well written one line summary that tells you what you need to know but not too much to draw the reader in. Then just enough character development to set the stage for the protagonist. The rest of the story was smooth and really drew me into the scene. Short yes, but perfectly handled, makes a logical end and leaves me wanting more of this type of first time pleasure. Most stories of this type do not work so well, either the story gets too lovey Dover or is too much in the paid and goes away line. While more stories about the protaganist'so exploration are desired, a separate series around the antagonist would be good as well. But not together..

Very good! I hope you write lots more!

Very erotic, and very well written!!

Hope you have another chapter coming soon. Well done.