All Comments on 'The Hottest Show on Earth Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hot

Great story. More magic and some telekinetic sex in the next installment would be awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
college party crashers

Hot scenes so far. I would really love to see Amy go wild at a crazy dorm party...magic, sex and mayhem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mark's turn

Mark should finally get a taste of power. Maybe poolside!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Jane and Kara

You have to explore their revenge. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

When is part 4 coming?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Still hoping you will write part 4 and post soon!

hotwords229hotwords229almost 9 years agoAuthor
Part 4 coming . . .

Part 4 is in the works (and has been for awhile) but I'm a little stuck on what to do with it. I have several different ideas for the direction it could head.

If you have any thoughts please share them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
mark

Maybe mark explores his power on her and others and then the girls seek revenge against Amy and he saves the day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Great story!! Don't stop here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Conclusion?

Will you be finishing this series?

hotwords229hotwords229almost 7 years agoAuthor
Hi

Thanks for your interest, yes, I will finish this story. I have recently written a new series (which you should check out) called Down for the Count. That series I wrote in its entirety before posting so that this wouldn't happen again. Most stories I've written (including this one) start as a single story and then people want more, then I think of more chapters, but didn't start off knowing where I was going and then I end up in this predicament where I'm not sure how to conclude it. For this story I do have a pretty great idea, but I haven't been able to write it yet, but soon . . .

Thanks again for taking the time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yummy

But you can't stop like thatF468

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Continue this story please

Please continue this story, it's been awesome so far

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