All Comments on 'The House Ch. 01'

slow start, but then it took off, I love the way you built up the story, and it got quite hot, inviting in the last comments to further installments and I personally would like to know there this story develops, so be so kind and continue!

This is absolutely the BEST story ever presented on Literotica!!! And.....the author put some HAIR on the pussy too!!! Goddamn a woman with a shaved bush!!!

A house planning it's future? Ridiculous - but wonderfully well done! I'm looking forward to ch 02........

Lukas

Butt terrible spelling.

An absolutely brilliant idea for a story. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next victim's chronicle.

This is a wellwritten story that contains several literary suggestions: mythical, gothic, romantic, lust, etc.

Keep up the good work. The sex scenes were very graphic without being pornographic.

taylorbear

Frankly this was so well-written and thought provoking that I didn't notice any misspellings. Having read "The Hauntintg" and "Rose Red", a couple of main stream tales of conscious houses, I am a fan of houses with thoughts and motives. But this is my first time reading of a good house, as compared with the above two evil houses. By all means please continue the story ...

I hope the term procreation comes true for some of the women. This is a great story. I would like to thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.

Please continue this great story line