by kalamazoo707
What exciting ride this is turning out to be. Can't wait for the update. I wonder if this new entity is just as strong as Aaron?????
this is story is so exciting, i want to know what's going to happen and just who is the new player and what does he want? i just love your stories kalamazoo, you are truely a talented writer with a great gift for story telling. thank you so much for sharing with us.
This was great i wonder what the new guy looks like :} and Yeah please make the next chapter very soon!!!
Darling...please.....I rush home after a full day ready to devour a full meal and you toss me a tidbit. A teaser which is making me hungry for more.
Eagerly awaiting..............
That was soo amazing kalamazoo!... im sooo greedy and need more of this story because its just so different and exciting! keep em coming plz!!
I can't wait to find out who this spirit is and what he wants with minerva.
This is a fanastic story. Wow. I am blown away by the depth of your writing and the clarity of your expression. For a while there I thought I was experiencing the various situations and emotions of Aaron, Dwayne and Minerva. Next time I go house hunting I would surely remember this story. With that being said, I can't wait for the next chapter to finally know who is behind all this sadistic mischief.
Now this is a really good story and I am glad that I finally started to read it. At first I thought that it was going to be just like any other story. Now I find that I am really enjoying myself.
Your characters are fantastic and very believable and it's been great getting to know them.
Please keep up the good work and thank you for your wonderful talents.