All Comments on 'The House Of Robles Ch. 01'

Author excels at raw character exposition and describing ascending levels of tawdry attraction and carnal culmination . In terms of what aspects of story could use polish ? The best stories will give the heat and work in classic themes of good versus evil ( with good not always winning ) and experiment with character archetypes. The sleaze was portrayed with skill, but wallowed in too long to consider full marks.

Hopefully Corvus Turim 777 mix it up in further installments . So far, this story has promise as the introduction that it purports to be.Maybe then the question of what the hell is an unabashed social climber and avid hip grinder like Carmela doing wasting time with husband who is ineffectual at former area of her interest and ineffective at the latter ? I thank the author for sharing.

Loved it. Looking forward to more. What do these other morons want, a harlequin romance novel? Ignore them. And please include some sisterly or mommy/daughter action this time around. 5 stars, both to offset the morons' 1, and because it just plain deserves it.

Good read very entertaining, Thanks for sharing.

...before she's back riding her papi like a rodeo bronco rider.

She'll have to figure something out with her husband, so when papi knocks her up, she can claim hubby did it....then papi will have to give her all her babies to keep the parentage obvious and consistent.....besides, she'll never be able to give up that cock and his stamina. It's what she's needed in a man, all along.

Well written, if indicative of a slight stupidity on her part...picking a man that doesn't offer what she wants...she's got everything she needs and wants for now.

Might as well enjoy it.

Please carry on....a LOT.