All Comments on 'The House Of Robles Ch. 16'

In summary I see a diamond in the rough author paying his dues. As a saga this was blurry and unfocused. BUT there were electric individual scenes and moments when characters suddenly defined themselves . Maybe I thought they were scum but they were of interest . There are reality shows that hit a groove and for a while are must watch TV , usually that doesn't last and things start to parody themselves.

This saga took false steps ( too much Pablo ) but still had viable story threads to explore . Yet it all depends on CorvusTurim111 and if he wants to continue or start something new. Either way , I'll read whatever . I know this much ..there will be memorable and unique moments and scenes to savor. I thank the author for sharing.