All Comments on 'The House on Moore Street'

Despite the otherworldliness of the Presence, the love, the dedication, the symbolism, the emotion, the sex and relationships expressed and described in this story were all real and believable. I absolutely loved this story and can admit parts made me tear up. With no disrespect to Litorotica, I truthfully feel this story was wasted here, it should have been published instead.

Had me gripped all the way through. The sex paled in comparison to the strength of the story and the writing. Well done.

I was enthralled by this haunting, atmospheric story. I totally agree with the other two comments. I will be trying to find other works by this talented author. - Judi

Way TOO wordy. Would have liked more indepth explanation of Presense with all the women. Would have appreciated more insight about the women and men of this household instead of long drawn out description of the sex. It has a wonderful story line, I lost interest with boring details of sex (like in EVERY story on this sight) would have been a superb story if we knew more detail how family evolve as well as THE PRESENSE, which was barelt mentioned