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diminutivedemisediminutivedemiseover 10 years ago
Four stars...

...because it isn't finished!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just another unfinished horror

If you can't finish it, don't write it. A zero.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Maybe it's just me...

...but I feel like the other stories -are- the end to this one. Everything else they do, giving Sven a place to be accepted and grow into a fantastic submissive, is part of swallowing him whole.

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