by wanderingmindgames
The pace is good. You're updating regularly. Character reactions are believable. I'm looking forward to more.
I'm all caught up in this story...I know she is going to run but I'm hoping she doesn't hurt him to bad
Who were those two idiots who interupted? Lordylordy Damy has some 'splaining to do.
So good to read! I love the quality and the time you take to ensure it's well written (although of course, I'm thinking "More! I want more NOW!")
P.S. I love that 'bacon' is a tag! Do people often use bacon as a search term when looking for a sexy story?
Can't wait for the next update. Keep going.
Evil! What a cliffhanger!! Definitely going to have to DEMAND you continue this story immediately -- as in last week!!! LOL
Great job -- and love reading every bit of it!
I'm afraid I must agree with some of the others that are demanding you post another chapter very quickly!!!! That's some cliffhanger you left us with, and definitely not the best way that Damian could have come up with to let her know what he was. I just hope that she doesn't listen to her first instincts, which are going to tell her to run as fast as she can away from Damian. These two definitely need each other. I am very curious to hear Damian's story though and find out what or who it was that hurt him so badly. I really hope that Charlie is able to accept that she is where she is supposed to be and see that it doesn't matter what Damian is.
Please post again soon!!!!
This story is really good. You capture the way it feels to be old enough to enjoy life while still feeling like you are a teenager. The sex is hot and leaves the reader wanting more ( a great sign). I will keep my eye out for more of this story. Really had fun reading so far.
Sherrylee
I just love a relationship where all the friends and family conspire to keep a couple together.
Wow, just stumbled across this one, and had to read all three chapters in one sitting. I love it. Not many stories have the ability to make me laugh, and cry in one sitting but you did both with this one.
I love the characters, and the LF's story is so sad. I hate that you left it off one that cliff hanger....arggg. I would love to see more of the friend Becky, and I love the mechanic too. I now am eager to hear who may have hurt big burly Damien, and I will eagerly await his story to unfold.
Keep us laughing, and crying but please don't let us wait too long.
M
Have to agree with the other comments,,,its NOT posted yet is the only problem with the next chapter,,Talk about teasing your fans,,,what a place to stop!!!!
Accepting what this site inherently offers the reader, I think I'd like more story and less sex. LOL I think it slows the story down...OMG I can't believe I just wrote that! Anyway, I really look forward to the continuation of the story...Bravo!
I love the development of this story! Well written, please keep writing!
Charlie is forty...You've never mentioned how old the twins are. :)
If she's traveling from Santa Fe and going to Oregon why did she stop in Washington in the first place? That makes no sense. You also mentioned the Handford area previously which is distracting and conflicting with the 360 area code which is not used anywhere near the Handford area...if you're going to use places in reality you should learn more about them. Washington is also an amazing and beautiful place and not shitty. If you can't tell I'm a proud Washingtonian. Your story is really good but these minor details are really distracting.
". . . before she went limp beneath him as she fainted."
At last! A story about weres that acknowledges that ordinary people might have some difficulty accepting furry, wolf-shaped people as real! People tend to write 'were' stories with 'ordinary people' accepting werewolves as a matter of course, and that's absolute rubbish – if any of us saw someone turning into a wolf in front of our eyes, we would freak out, pass out, and get ourselves to a doctor at the earliest possible opportunity. We wouldn't just say "pass the salt" and get on with it, as seems to be the norm in so many of these stories.
Great chapter.
I was wondering when she was going to find out they are all wolves.
Hey there - today is Monday, October 27, 2014, and yes, I am alive.
Sorry to have left you all so long, sorrier still to have left Damian and Charlie for so long. I have been through almost a year of one heartbreak after another. An end to a marriage of almost two decades, an end to a new relationship, an end to friendships I thought were wholly unbreakable...the pain, the hurt, was real, it was physical, and it clouded everything. Even the precious time I spent with the Dimeos and Charlie.
Yeah, I know how it sounds. But consider this: it's not an EXCUSE. It's an explanation.
It took me a while to get over it all. But I did. The past is the past; I cannot change what happened, and honestly don't think I would wish to at this point.
I appreciate everyone's patience and understanding. I am writing again. It was hard to start again, but that - thankfully - was short lived. Even better, I am hearing Damien and Charlie and Becky and everyone again. Which is a grand thing.
I will have the next chapter up ASAP.
Best,
-W
This story has me so entranced. It amazes me how seamlessly you blend reality, folklore, and incredibly steamy sex.