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phoenixcindersphoenixcindersover 5 years agoAuthor
Tell me what you think

Feel free to comment your thoughts. I would love to know what you think about the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice job

I'd really like to see a sequel to this,I believe this to be well-written and I want to see a sequel written for it if possible

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good story

I like the story.

What I find a little strange was his Reaktion.

Noo feelings of betray. No awareness that she was a bit bevor killing him.

I think he lake a little emotions. Also her behavior was a little much to self-evident

She risk his life and tell him this so casual.

She was more emotional about her sister then him.

I think a little drama is needed what would make the story absolutely perfekt

Hope that help you

Look forward for more stories

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