All Comments on 'The Hunt Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I loved the twist. Waiting for more!

sheikurbootisheikurbootialmost 10 years ago
Critics... Jeez

Nice, sequel?

Good imagination

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
not everything has to be realistic

W, dont letWhich is why, when considering how AMAZING this story was, its obvious it deserves five stars. Also i'm happy you didn't post it in gay male. The majority of stories I enjoy have gay overtones, but i dont really enjoy stories that lack the feminine element, which most stories in that section lack. Thus, if you had put this story in that section, then i would have been sorely dissapointed because it is a great story and i really did enjoy it. btw dont let the haters get to you

TurningintoCDTurningintoCDalmost 10 years ago
Great job!

Loved the story! I cummed after reading it =)

toni49toni49almost 10 years ago

great story reALLY HOT and well wrote

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Eloquent and moving

There's gunna be a HUNT

Cuz he wants to be a CUNT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More!

Please add more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
morning after

the drunk wakes up with a sore ass and remembers what happened. with

the hang over he wants to kill himself. the man whore just found new pray.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

This story isn't entirely without merit and I can see lots of people have enjoyed it. For me, the premise was ok, but with a few tweaks, such as practicing a feminine voice, or making the character less obviously masculine to begin with might have led to it being more believable.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
very good story

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Quite different than most others. keep writing... looks like it could be a very interesting plot line.

WetCoyoteWetCoyotealmost 10 years ago
Good Start

Not too bad for a first time story. Please continue.

RebeccaCherieRebeccaCheriealmost 10 years ago
Loved it

Gorgeous.

I used Halloween as one of my earliest opportunities to dress fem in public. ;-)

Nice memories.

Xxxxx

Rebecca

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago
oh shit that was hot

OMG i hope you add more

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