All Comments on 'The Hunt Pt. 02'

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BresticlesBresticlesover 9 years ago
great

I really look forward to the continuation of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great story

Another hot chapter I can't wait to see what happens next. Maybe the rich guy and our hunter will hook up? Could be the rich guy is into being dominated?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
inconsistent

In the second sentence of The Hunt part 1 the writer states he is 6-2. In part 2 he says he's 5-8. In over four years this has gone uncorrected. Although the story had potential to focus on important issues such as gender fluidity and date rape, there is nothing here except one guy's distracted attempt at arousing others. That was in 2014 -- not a word since.

liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago
i really did like the idea ofthe story

it was short, and didn't flow real well, but i still thought it was hot. i hope he managed to fool a few more.

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