All Comments on 'The Hypnotist’s Assistants'

Confusing story, not sure what is or what isn't. Plus I'm really tired of these stories of white women going berserk for a black cock. Trust me, most don't have one, and if they do, they don't know what to do with it. I guess that's a white guy's fantasy, but for us who know it's a stupid fantasy.

the author had a good story going here then blew it

I thought it was great. I only wish he would have gotten to the boss's wife.

I enjoyed your story very much, in fact this is the first time I,ve given a five rating on any story. Thank You {YODAPOP}

i'm sorry, but i am so damn sick of all these stories always being about the guy getting his wife taken, or screwed in front of him, or both, or just somehow someone else gets to enjoy her body while he suffers for it, i don't even know who you are who wrote this story, but in response, all i have to say is FUCK YOU!!!! try writing a story that has maybe the woman having to suffer rather than being the pawn to hurt the man? ever think of that? of course not, you asinine bitch...

Well that was certainly mindfuck. Good job with the sense of paranoia, but overall I found the plot boring and not erotic.l

Style is different and unique.Very Good.

the open end (no pun intended) is great, because the imagination can go wild... repeating motives makes a sort of loop in one´s head, so the story could go on forever. You are an excellent story writer, and I am confident that you would write great stories, no matter what the subject!

This is not a story to read right before going to bed. Kinda like Inception isn't a good movie to watch before bed

Kind of hypnotic itself. A lot of fun, though

Just dumd! Plain and simple dumd. It had a chance to be good but blew it the the ending. My first 1 gos to this storie.

You writing put my ass to sleep. Stop pretending to be a writer.You suck big balls.

Erotic moments. Thrilling content. I don’t love open ended stories like this has. I believe big reveals need a little explaining for full impact.