All Comments on 'The Ice Cream Sundae Ch. 01'

Are you kidding me? Get a life. Someone who does yoga would not have double F's.

What is wrong with you idiots that think woman should have these unimaginable tits? Women with big tits hate them. They hurt.

Try to write something that is believable would you?

Your next chapter will tell us how your mother is a MILF (Yeah right!!! With tits that big, your mother is at least 100 pounds over weight) then you will tell us you about your 10 inch cock and how your mother has never seen anything that big.

Are you really that insecure that you can't tell the world the truth? Tell about your teeny wheeny 5 incher and we might believe you for a change.

Just get real when you write!!!!!!!!!!!

Not badly written, but not enough, not even for a beginning. I gave it a 3, it might have been higher if there had been more of it.

Actually my woman has big tits and she loves them they aren't f's but she has DD's. Also why complain so much about a story, there's criticism then there is just being rude and that anon is what you are doing.

this wasn't even long enough to submit as far as I'm concerned!!! Not just that, but when it IS long enough, you need to know how to leave off at a proper ending point for a chapter. just finish the effin story then submit it. You folks that do this must be on some needy power trip, forcing us to submit to your ego's. Get over yourself and make it about us, not you already!!!

It was too short, my vote is for the potential of the story. Add to it and resubmit, you have a lot of opportunity to make it more interesting.

The 11 inch cock to go with the mongo tits .. same old story ...

We're ready for chapter 2 & 3

Great title. I hope further chapters fit the theme.

Hey man, straight up, I fucking enjoyed this. Im excited for further chaprters. Great build up with lots of detail. Only change I would make is the moms tit size.

was bored half way thru the 3rd paragraph

The story is good but I will not follow it anymore. I was 'turned off' when you said the mom had "double F" cup bra. Get real and give the woman a normal sized bust. Not everyone likes abnormally big boobs.

Story is okay; however, I like indept character development and logical plot/subplot development.