All Comments on 'The Ice Cream Sundae Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good one.

Good story so far and funny as well. Looking forward to chapter Three keep it up.

FantasyTrainFantasyTrainover 10 years ago

So funny it could be real!

More!

MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedover 10 years ago
* * * * *

laughing when I finished reading this.

Lovely little tale so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

4*! I'm surprised at the direction this story took. Most stories would have Amos wait a few days hiding-out with his camera and filming as the Mom-Olivia lesbo stuff happened. Then Amos would take control by sending a DVD to Mom and Olivia with all their lesbo activities he had filmed, blackmailing them for all kinds of sex and sh!t. Can't wait for Chap 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I liked it!

Can't wait to see what's coming with his mom so that it fits in this category.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
nice

Eta for chapter 3?

No1holywoodNo1holywoodalmost 8 years ago

Shame this story was never finished

swfb70swfb70over 7 years ago
darn

was looking forward to chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Chapter 3

I enjoyed reading your stories . I am waiting on chapter 3 to see what happens next.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 2 years ago

The story has potential.

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