All Comments on 'The Iceman's Wrath Ch. 02'

Girl, I'd not read part 01 so I had to do so. Loved the comeuppance Jason gave Brianne! I'm dad of a chubby 19 y/o cutie and have had the hots for many of her friends. One 15 y/o showed me her oh so fine tits and offered them. Thoughts of prison time stopped me. Oh well. Excellent writing sexy but not pornographic like. I can hardly wait for Megan to bring her laundry over! Maybe Brianne will wise up. Or maybe(dare I say it?) Naom? Write fast!

Good read of teaching others respect(which is lost on many). Give little pleasures while not to the highest levels of orgasmic pleasure !

Great stuff. Really enjoying these encounters with those naughty teens. Maybe try going for more content per chapter. Hope to see what happens next!

Great story telling..even believable.smirk

I love your story so far, very interesting mix of sex and original humor (I love the "imagination" scenes with the different Jasons, very creative). Please keep up the good work, both of your current series are phenomenal and I anxiously await further chapters of both.

Rough and crude.... But with tenderness and heart when needed.

That's what makes a great Dad.

Please keep the FF stuff real deal and to a minimum.

Ghosts are like rivers, deeper than you think and quite....

got a chuckle out of the dad and wild jasons. keep them up front at decision making times. nice twist on the angel/devil consciences.

Just please keep writing the way you do, I love the way they have him wrapped around their fingers, along with the thought of Dad via Wild Jason in the background of his mind awesome piece of detail. 5*+. Iceman

Thank you, Annabelle, for submitting this story. You understand men pretty well. It was very creative and fun to read. I kept laughing and that just make it more entertaining. 5 stars for you girl. Hope chapter 3 isn't too far away!!!

Really enjoying your story, please keep this one going.

Thank you and keep writing.

Nice little pair of stories. Hope you feel free to get creative.

goes on since Ab-Ovo, TK U MLJ LV NV

Enjoying these just as much as monsters, hope you keep up the good work.

Always a joy to read your work dear. Thank you for sharing with us, your readers.

Jason has the potential for a harem going here. I loved the idea of Megan (the good girl) being the one to bed him first. It will be interesting to see if you end up pairing him with someone like Ms Kazowski or a little tart like Brienne. You have already teased us with an incestuous pairing with Megan and her step-sister, are you possibly setting up Jason with Naomi in a future chapter?

Love your work, and patiently waiting for the next chapter of HFHFM!

Both stories are well written. Well done. G.

Love how you bring Jason's Conscience to life with their actions and reactions. I find it awesome how smoothly you have your mc (Jason) look to them for advice. Also it was pretty smooth how you integrated the interaction between mc and Megan. Keep up the good work.

I love the characters in this story, especially how you play around with Jason’s moral dilemmas

I love it, your channeling shaharazade and pumping out gold and diamonds again. pleease keep writing lady, you are entertaining beyond measure.

Chapter 3 , Please!!!! Your characters are well done and ergotism is superb😎

Love the Dad Jason/Wild Jason sideline coaches. 5 thumbs up.

You're making wonderful progress.

DO notice how many comments you're being awarded!

You deserve them!

I hope you will keep this series going.

Thanks

Dad Jason and would Jason are hilarious! Haven’t laughed so much reading a story in a while.

I like the way you have dealt with Brianne and then how Megan went all wild.

You gave my old brain a rush from reading your story.

Keep up the good stuff.

Fantasy is always fun to read.

Oh yes... and I completely agree with other comments about Wild Jason and Dad Jason. Made me laugh and put a nice touch to the story.

I'm a fan now.

Gave you 5 stars... well earned!

The internal arguments between 'Dad Jason & Wild Jason' are very familiar. I've always said that there is a big difference between 'Daddy, Ted, and Dirty' , Daddy of course is the man that my children and their friends know, Ted is a little wilder, basically an average guy, but Dirty, I have to keep him locked away most of the time. That crazy sumbitch wants to fight or fuck just about everybody, and he ain't wanting to follow any rules at all.

You and Tefler are the two best writers on Lit. I am enjoying your divergence from HFHM atm, but look forward to your continuing both. Per Iceman, I am looking forward to him putting out real fires and saving lives so more fires get started...Ms. Kozowski perhaps? Lol. Love the tender descriptions as well as the harder stuff and def the dom-look forward to more of Naomi's taming! Great balance! Cheers

There's a lot of sex stories out there that are sexy and accomplish what they intend to, but for something to really get a reaction, there has to be chemistry, a spark, good characters being their best selves, their worst selves and often their best worst selves. Mission accomplished in this chapter, I look forward to reading more!

While waiting for the next episode of the Radly house i thought i would chexk this out and im not dissapointed very sexy an fun an i love the whole 'wild Jason dad Jason' internal conflict, waving a foam finger chearing you on!

JC

A really hot story so far.I hope the rest of the series are as good as the first 2.Great writing.

I really like analogy of the shoulder devil and angel. Always manage to put a real story in to your stories.

Be pleased at your stories...thanks!

I got a good chuckle out of Jason reading Time magazine. Didnt think it was even in print anymore lol. I all so enjoy the Dad Jason and Wild Jason aspects of the story. It adds a nice touch.

Loved it! Excellent balance between HOT & EXQUISITELY COLD! The inclusion of the ice trick probably made more than one guy beg, and inspired some wives and girlfriends to add it to their inventory of spice. Keep up the good work, looking forward to more.

Very interesting setup so far.

I hope dad Jason holds UP ok.

The two personalities are a silly addition, but also fun way to sort conflict.

Looking forward to many more young visitors :)

I totally agree with @JasonRTaylor of 3 months ago. Great fiction, well written!

Dad Jason with a coronary problem is a classic image. Great writing.

And a tiny bit kinky, but well written. So Well done lady.

Delicious.

I just finished all your other stories! This if a fun read while I wait for more Monsters. Your talent is amazing.

I already like Megan a lot. Bossy readheads are my weakness so it is no surprise. Your work is always leagues above what I normally see on this site.

Awesome story, this is my kink...5 stars!!

I too am partial to Red headed women...

God, I love your stories. They're hilarious.

Another easy 5...really like the characters, and the dialogue...

it's always the quiet 'good' girls...her practicing with her stepsister's strap-on really got my attention...

and Naomi setting him up with her teacher...tho he'll really have to keep her and Maria wide apart...

and women most always know...a stray hair he just doesn't notice, tampons, spare toothbrush...

Lucky, lucky man!

5 stars - great story -love the 2 dads, very clever idea

Great - really liked your use of metaphors, '..the air became angry with the heat'

one of the best writers here!!

good strory! not because of the plot, thats not bad, but for the atmosphere the story is written in. plus its nice to see the improvments in the different storys over time.

I LOVE Wild Jason and Dad Jason, they have such a unique and funny dynamic to them!

Megan seems like a fun girl.

I second the two dad idea...

I'll love their antic's

I forgot how much I enjoyed your take on the conscience-on-your-shoulder thing; hilarious!

"Always trust a shoulder demon!" - King Clawthorne

rereading it and love it the second time through also

Oh. My. Goodness. You are one mean writer, you do know that? And I love you for it!

My goodness Annabbelle, what a naughty vixen you are! I'm current on all your hfhm and D&H, which are nicely erotic, but I had no idea you wrote any straight out stroke stories. Very hot! The Iceman cometh, and so did I. Thanks! Can't wait to read the rest of this excellent, stiffening tale.

By the way, I loved the snowballing scene. May not be some guys thing but I found it sexy as hell!

The foam finger antics full sent me!! Love this side of your writing!!