All Comments on 'The Imperfect Storm Ch. 05'

I liked the way you cleverly brought Whiney and Kylie together in order to have Whit accept, even desire, Trent's loving of his sister.

Listen pal, if "eventually" is any longer than 4 days, I'm coming through these wires and throttling you!

Awesome (ya, overused) magnificent masturbatory material. How is Trent going to deal with 4 bitches? Gotta' love fiction...

Love how it's coming together. Can't wait to see how you work out him and four women.

I hope that this brings an end to the Trent cheating on Whitney story arc now that he has engaged in intimacy with all of his partners in her presence. I'm also somewhat bothered by Kylie cheating on Richard, but to a lesser extent since he has allegedly expressed interest in ending his marriage and is also allegedly cheating on Kylie with the woman from work. But as they say, "two wrongs don't make a right."

I suspect that Richard is also up to no good and is probably embezzling money at work. He actually has no logical reason for being good to Trent and hooking him up with a dream job. I think that Richard needs a patsy and he is going to set Trent up to be the fall guy. Then again, you have mainly focused on writing smut for your readers to jerk off to. So maybe it's wishful thinking on my own part that there's actually an interesting tale hiding between the lines here somewhere. 🤔 3/5