The Imperfect Storm Ch. 06

[Pull back. We are at John Doe's back at the newsstand. From the side, a beautiful face appears. She turns to face John Doe. She looks a little aggravated, like he might tell him to pay attention or something. But suddenly she stops. We see his head moving slightly, he gestures with his coffee, he's talking to our girl. Her slight scowl turns into a cautious little grin... and then a big smile. She tilts her head ever so slightly. (Note: Her eyes are 'radiant'. Use eyelight on camera so light reflects on her eyes.)]

[Wide street shot. From the rear, we see John Doe in tan coat walking with our girl in her red blazer. They are casually bumping into each other.]

[Black]

Woman speaking: And then, I was not alone.

[Montage. (All shots have camera sliding left-to-right. We always see our gal full face, full body, but we only ever see John Doe's back. He is always identified by the tan overcoat)]

[Fancy Restaurant. Our gal is being seated at a table, the hostess takes John's coat. We see her talking animatedly with wine on the table. She eats a piece of steak, listening attentively.]

[Hockey rink, like a practice facility. The team all waves to John Doe. They smile and give approving looks to our gal. A puck hits the glass. Our gal jumps into his arms. He doesn't flinch and holds her.

[NIghtclub] We see her in a different, hotter outfit (to be chosen later) but has some red in it. She's dancing in a sexy way. He's got rhythm and some moves, but is subdued. She's doing all the good stuff. We see her laughing at the bar, facing him.]

[Black]

Woman speaking: You took me...

[Montage. Again, we see her face and body etc. We only see him from the back. He is identified by a tattoo of an eagle on his shoulder.]

[Bedroom. Nighttime. Shadows. Low light. Undressing scenes. He takes off his coat. Cut to taking off his shirt. We see the eagle on his shoulder. Our gal is on her back. Hair fanned out perfectly on the pillows. The back of his head next to her, buried in the pillows. They are fucking. He is resting on his forearms like a gentleman. Camera pulls back. We see that she is grabbing his ass, pulling him into her. For the first time, we hear sounds. They are both grunting and gasping and "Ohhh" and "Yes" etc. They both stiffen. Close-up on her face. Her eyes glint. We can tell she cums as she tilts her head back, her mouth opens, she smiles beautifully, then she grabs his head and nuzzles his neck, squealing a little bit.]

[Different Bedroom. His. Daytime. From the rear, we see him and his tattoo mounting her from behind. She's on all fours. We clearly see her breasts swaying, her thighs shaking from his strokes. Cut to front view close-up her face. She's breathing hard, we can see and hear her saying 'yes, yes, yes'. Close-up, side-view of his thighs crashing into her thighs. She pulls forward and off him. His big cock is sticking straight out. She quickly turns around and puts her mouth on his cock. She strokes him hard. Pulling back, she looks up at his face (offscreen) and opens her mouth. She jerks him a couple more times and cum shoots all over her nose, cheeks, mouth, lips, hair. Laughing, she swallows down the parts that went in her mouth.]

[Her Bedroom. Different day. The back of his head is to us, but we can see that he's eating her pussy. Close-ups: Man's tongue in wet cunt. Man sucking on pussy lips. Man's finger going in and out of her. Two fingers. Three fingers. Four. Cut to close-up her face. Her hair is a mess, she's slightly sweaty. She arches her back and cums, thrashing around.]

[Different Session. She's on all fours. She turns to look at him. She has a questioning, doubtful, look on her face. We see his tattoo, he moves his hands and shakes his head as if explaining or re-assuring her about something. She looks unconvinced. Close-up. He squeezes a gel into his hand, and strokes his cock with it. It's very lubed up. Camera follows his hand as he places some gel on her asshole. Close up her face. Scrunched up. Not so very happy. Close-up her butt. His cock is knocking at her back door. Alternate shots between her face and her ass. Even more scrunched up face. We see the head of his cock enter her has, there's resistance, then it pops in. A look of sheer terror on her face. He pushes and pulls his cock in and out, he's almost all the way in. She looks scared, her head shaking as he begins fucking her. He's pulling all the way out now and slamming it back into her ass. She grimaces. He grips her hips for more power and buttfucks her hard. Her face softens. He pistons into her ass. Her mouth opens, we hear her, quietly at first, "Fuck... me... fuck me." then louder. "Fuck ME Fuck My ASSHOLE GODDAMMIT!" Sweat drips onto her from him. He pushes her fully onto the bed. She screams into a pillow, holding it tight. He jerks hard, and so does she. He trembles and throbs, obviously cumming inside her butt. Her hair, wet with sweat, streaks across her face. Close up of a white wall. His hand moves into the shot. He snaps his finger, and points downward. We see her looking offscreen. She gets up off the bed and squats on the wooden floor. She plays with her asshole a little, cum starts dribbling out. When it's all out. she gets down on her knees, holds her hair back with one hand, and proceeds to lick it up of the floor. She swallows all she can. She looks up, tentatively. Then she smiles as he places his hand on her head. She crawls up to him and licks his cock and balls.]

[Black]

Woman speaking: You taught me... things I never even dreamed of...

[Montage. Candle wax dripping on her tits. Her tits being spanked. Her ass being spanked. Her face deep-throating him. Sucking cum off the floor. Cum dripping into her hand from her cunt, she drips it into her mouth. Her hands tied behind her back, mascara running down her face, his cock furiously fucking her mouth. We hear "Yes" and "Fuck me baby" and assorted other things showing she loves it. She sits on his face, cumming. We see them coming out of the nightclub, into the alleyway. He points to the trashcan. She walks over, hikes up her short skirt, spreads her legs, grabs her pussy, and tries to pee on it. He fucks her from behind, hard. We see her in her apartment, hands tied in front of her, tied to a jacket hook on the wall, her forearms parallel with the wall, leaning against it, she's bent over, her gorgeous ass stick out, he takes her from there, we see her face smiling, she loves it this way. Cumshot to her face. Cumshot to her tits. Cumshot to her face. Cumshot in her mouth. Slo-motion cum, traveling through the air, catching her in her mouth, she smiles as it hits her lips and teeth, her tongue bringing it to her throat.

[Black]

Woman speaking: You had me completely.

[Sitting at table, looking at computer advertisements. The back of his head nods. She is unpacking kitchen things in a new apartment, bigger, nicer. Cumshot to her face. She picks up his dry-cleaning. Cum dripping from her pussy. She makes dinner. She sucks his cock, turns her head, and sucks another cock, she looks up, we see his head nodding yes, two cumshots to her face. She vacuums the apartment. She looks apprehensive, we see him nodding again, she shrugs her shoulders, she dips her tongue into a woman's vagina. Vagina Squirt to her face. She's getting the mail. He fucks her as she's tied to the wall again. She's at the office doing shit. She's getting fucked from behind as she sucks another guy's cock. She's getting dressed in the mirror, she looks so happy. He comes up behind her, whispers in her ear, and they go offscreen, they appear to go to a kind of a S&M club, big black guy at the door lets them in after looking around surreptitiously.

Woman speaking: And I thought I had you...

[She's laying naked on the bed, asleep after sex, He's dressed, putting on his tan overcoat, he reaches in to his pocket, pulls out a ring, he slips it on his left hand ring finger, he leaves. She's tied on the wall again, bent over, he's taking her from behind, she's loving it, he looks at his watch, oral cumshot and swallow, she looks so happy. She's at the apartment dinner table, alone, waiting. They are having missionary sex, he seems to finish, but she's nowhere near. She looks out the window on the rainy street, she's alone. She's tied on the wall again, her face looks concerned, her eyes dart about, he cums on her ass, just a little bit comes out, he wipes it up and feeds it to her, she licks it, trying to be sexy. They are fighting in a restaurant. He leaves. She follows. Many city blocks. We see a woman stepping out of her brownstone house, manuevering a baby carriage. From behind, we see our man enter the picture, her eyes light up as she sees him. They hug and kiss, and take the baby on a walk down the street. Our girl, always shot with the lights reflecting in her eyes, is now shot with the lights turned off, her eyes appear dark, lifeless.]

Woman speaking: You cast me adrift... without an anchor...

[Our girl is having random sex. Montage: some guy fucking her hard, she's sweating, but her face is blank, she's not into it. Cumshot to her mouth, she dutifully swallows it without joy. Two guys fucking her, two guys cumming on her, she performs her duties. Guy fucks her from behind in the alley of the nightclub, she calls out 'oh yeah fuck me harder' with no real enthusiasm. She stares blankly at her computer screen at work. A guy and girl are fucking with our girl, we see her have an orgasm, and a faint smile, but it fades. Another guy fucks her in the alley and pushes her down. She lays in the puddle where she fell, not getting up. A baglady comes by and takes her shoes. Other people stop and point. Ambulance comes. Crowd shot of gawkers. We see the same big black guy from the S&M club. She's back home, doing shit around the house. not smiling. The big black guy shows up at her door. They talk into the night.]

[Dungeon? Our girl is in a bright red partial corset, partial as her now hairy pussy is exposed. Her thigh-high red leather boots look spectacular. Her face is made up with some severe looking make-up job. Riding crop in her hand, she is the perfect image of a BDSM Mistress. We see the black guy again with a naked guy. The black guy is training her, correcting her moves, making sure her posture is dominating. She is whipping her trainee boy, she begins to like it.]

Woman speaking: But without you, I would not have found my calling...

[We see a line of several people, men and women, at the door of the 2nd avenue club. Inside shot. Our gal is counting hundred dollar bills. There's several stacks of them. Black guy sticks his head in, she nods. Montage: Our girl dominating many people in dungeon environment, girls, guys, girls and guys. She yells at them, taunts them, ties them up, fucks some of them, sucks some of them, spanks and whips them, licks cum from her high heels. She counts her money. More customers. We hear voices, "Please Mistress," "Yes Mistress," "No Mistress," "I love you Mistress," "I love you Mistress," "I love you Mistress"... We see her at her old job, cleaning out her desk. More shots of her dominating people.]

Woman speaking: And then... you came back...

[Tan overcoat man enters the club. Everyone knows him and is glad to see him. Big Black shakes his hand enthusiastically, walks him to a private room. Our guy signs the consent form and hands it to Big Black, who then also takes the clothes from our boy, as it seems he has many times before. Big Black chains him in the middle of the room, obviously with our man's consent. He then blindfolds him. From the back, we see the eagle tattoo on his shoulder. Big Black enters our gals private room. He points to a video monitor, where our gal recognizes the man in chains. She turns and stops, her hand coming to her face. Then we see her smile and grab a little satchel full of things]

[Dungeon. We see our girl enter the dungeon, smiling at the man. Blindfolded, he doesn't know what's happening, but he's smiling as he stands naked and chained in the center of the room. Our girl traces her riding crop down the side of his face, down his chest and abdomen, and then she whacks his thigh hard. He jumps but keeps on smiling. Our gal smirks and moves around him sensually, rubbing herself against his well muscled body. We can see his cock rising. We see him trying to talk with her, but she won't answer. Finally she stops in front of him, and lowers herself down to his cock and sucks it. She sucks it very well, very deep. We see his face contort as if he's about to cum. She stops, and stands up. We can see him pleading, struggling for release of his cum. Instead, she leans forward and kisses him lightly. He strains to push against her but she's too smart for that. He relaxes and they kiss more, their tongues coming together, her hand sliding behind his head. She eventually pulls back. He looks thoughtful, like this could be, might be, familiar or something.]

[Close ups. Our gal reaches into her bag and pulls out something we can't see. She yanks off his blindfold. He blinks a lot, we see his face for the first time. He's rather handsome. He blinks several times under the light, then recognition dawns on him. He smiles at first, then tries to reach for her when he remembers he's shackled. A look of terror crosses his face. He struggles but she grabs him and straps a ball gag onto his mouth. He can scream, but no one will ever hear him. His dick is still hard. She spits in his face, then she kicks him in the balls. His eyes bulge and he collapses, only he can't because of his shackles. He moans and tears roll down his eyes as he hangs there. Our gal brings over a special bench and puts it in front of him. Carefully, she unlocks his arms and helps him fall onto the bench. She quickly shackles his hands down along the sides of the bench. She gets a strap-on from her bag, it's ridiculously big. He sobs more. She spits on it, sucks it, in front of him, then straps it on herself. She gets behind him and spits some more on his ass, then shoves it into him. His body goes rigid as he shrieks and screams, but to no avail. She pounds his cheating ass, hard. She pulls out of him, and removes his ball gag. But instantly she shoves the dildo into his mouth. She waves her hand.]

[Close up on Big Black as he walks in. Pull out, we see he's naked, with a big fucking cock hanging between his legs. We see terror again in our boy's eyes as he thinks he's going to get ass raped again. But instead, our girl undoes her strap-on and begins to suck Big Black's cock. She can only go down about three fourths of the way, but she's very enthusiastic. Our man is seen to be talking until she holds up the ball gag again, he shuts up. Big Black turns her over and fucks her hard from behind on the concrete floor. She loves it and yells and hoots and hoolers. Our man turns his head, Big Black slaps him and points his face back to the action.]

[Close up of our girl. We see the glint in her eyes again, she smiles and laughs and shouts as she cums full force from Big Black's fucking. Presently, she gets close to our boy, putting her face next to his. Big Black puts his cock in her mouth and with short but fast strokes, fucks her face hard. His face tightens up as he cums, our gal catching all of it in her mouth. She looks at our tattooed friend, Big Black holds his mouth open, and she spits it into our guys face. Most of it lands in his mouth. Big Black points a big finger at him, and he reluctantly swallows.]

[Alleyway. Our boy is seen being thrown into the alley. He's got his pants on, he stumbles in the garbage piles. Shoes are tossed at him. Then his tan overcoat.]

[Our girl smiles, the gleam in her eye still. She and big Black look at a clipboard, and start pointing at some things in the dungeon. Camera pulls back, she is making motions as if they are going to redecorate the dungeon with some new stuff.]

[Fadeout]

My girls just sat there, staring off into space.

"Well?" I asked. "Anything?"

Finally, Stacy spoke up. "Well, where to begin. It's so full of cliche's that it almost hurts my feelings. Your characters are cardboard, the plot is obvious, and the ending is somewhat weak."

I looked dejectedly at the carpeting.

"But!" Stacy continued. "Hey, look at me. I'm not done. But! I'm also incredibly tuned on and if You don't touch me in about 5 seconds I'm going to scream!"

"Really?" I asked. "You got horny form it?"

"3 - 2 -" she counted down.

I jumped beside her on the couch and hugged her. I put my hand in her crotch, I could feel the heat from her as she clamped her legs down and dry humped my hand. I looked over at Whitney.

"Well, what did you think, baby?"

"I'm a little stunned. Stunned at how fucking psycho you are. Stunned that I liked most of it. Stunned that I wanted that big black guy to fuck him in the ass at the end."

I laughed at that.

Missy spoke up. "Trent, I already came in my shorts, look." She stood up for us, her wet spot very apparent. She shook her head and took them off. No panties, of course. She likes going commando.

"You have to film it," Melissa continued. She sat back down and lazily rubbed her pussy. "But, can you? That's a lot of people! Do you know any big black guys?"

"No, I have no idea how to really do this. It just came to me one day."

"Seriously?" asked Whitney. "Things like this just come to you? You are a warped little individual, aren't you!" But she said it with a twinkle in her eye.

I was still rubbing Stacy through her pants when she said to Whitney. "Hey middle sister. You said nothing's changed between all of us, right? Well I need to get fucked right fucking now so join in or whatever but I need this man!"

Whiteny laughed. "You two, or you three go on without me. I'm still going through my clothes. Don't be all day, though. We've got to get back, Trent. Big day tomorrow."

Right. Big day at my new job tomorrow. But... it's a pretty big day right now, too!

Missy came over to us, but Stacy stopped her. "Honey, sweetie, could you just give me ten minutes? You can sit right there and watch or whatever, but can i just get a little 'Trent' time alone? Please? You can have him afterwards."

A little sadly, Melissa sat back down on the couch. But she kept fingering herself and watching us.

Stacy hurriedly undressed, I did too. I like having sexy girls all around me, but I also like the one-on-one stuff too. Stacy laid down on the couch, pulling me on top of her.

She whispered so Missy couldn't hear. "Just fuck me. Now. I'm ready, just put it in."

I maneuvered between her legs, my cock found her wet pussy waiting. She was ready, alright. Ready, waiting, and fucking oozing on my cock. She kissed me as I slid deep into her. Little "oh's" and "yes"es escaped from her lips. She whispered more to me.

"Thank you for the movie script... I'm so flattered... and you're going to be the guy, right?"

I nodded affirmative.

"There's so many cumshots from your character... so much cum... I believe I get covered in it a few times... covered in your cum... oh you fuck me so well... cover me in your cum... always... never stop... and fuck my ass, and tie me to a wall... and fuck me with another guy... I'll suck both your cocks at the same time... but I'll never kick you in balls baby... never...Oh I like it nice and slow like this... but you can do anything to me... slap me... spank me... spit on me... oh you like that?"

I erupted inside her. Talking to me like that, it kills me. Having her tell me over and over that he wanted my cum, well I couldn't keep it inside any longer. My throbbing cock triggered her orgasm. Stacy kissed me deeply as her pussy walls contracted on raging cock.

"Okay okay!" Missy interrupted. "Break it up you two! What is this, amateur hour? Quit fooling around and fuck me hard, Trent!"