All Comments on 'The Incentive Plan'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
well done but,

done before and done often. you made this story i've read before feel new again.

beachbum1958beachbum1958almost 11 years ago
Great Fun!

This was fun and funny, and definitely up to your usual standards; I enjoyed it thoroughly, keep 'em coming!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Love this story and love your work!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
WTF?

The suspension of disbelief required to remotely accept this premise is absurd. You casually throw in the fact that the couple used to swing, which of course means that the wife would expect the husband to fuck his daughter. Same difference, right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Domme vs Dom

Domme = dominant female. Dom = dominant male. You should've used the word Domme. Just for future reference. ;)

OneIBlindOneIBlindalmost 11 years ago
Now What!

Like a good cover of an old classic, you've created a very stirring rendition of this tale. I hope we can catch up with the family through some cross tales, like Angel or Janis' friends but this stands just as well on its own. Well done...as usual.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So hot hot

Oh you really are a totally debauched fucking sucking sex maniac, just like me. Love it, but more and more this please and soon. I just love eating cunt and fucking cunt at the same time. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
That was beyond nasty shit

Fucking his daughter as an incentive to lose wight? And having his wife decide she's a dominatrix? Could you put anymore unbelievable garbage into this mess?

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Cute, pretty hot and definitely enjoyable.

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