by BrettJ
done before and done often. you made this story i've read before feel new again.
This was fun and funny, and definitely up to your usual standards; I enjoyed it thoroughly, keep 'em coming!
The suspension of disbelief required to remotely accept this premise is absurd. You casually throw in the fact that the couple used to swing, which of course means that the wife would expect the husband to fuck his daughter. Same difference, right?
Domme = dominant female. Dom = dominant male. You should've used the word Domme. Just for future reference. ;)
Like a good cover of an old classic, you've created a very stirring rendition of this tale. I hope we can catch up with the family through some cross tales, like Angel or Janis' friends but this stands just as well on its own. Well done...as usual.
Oh you really are a totally debauched fucking sucking sex maniac, just like me. Love it, but more and more this please and soon. I just love eating cunt and fucking cunt at the same time. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's UK
Fucking his daughter as an incentive to lose wight? And having his wife decide she's a dominatrix? Could you put anymore unbelievable garbage into this mess?
1 star