All Comments on 'The Indecisive Dominant'

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gentleoneexplorergentleoneexplorerover 8 years ago
Lacking in Substance, More Next Time Please

If the Dom is this indecisive have you not talked about your limits and perhaps that should have been in here. I am not getting much substance from this story except perhaps the Dom is indulging in alcohol and has little to no interest in doing anything but binding and silencing a sub. I hope there is much more substance to the story than this. As a new writer this may be a start but there needs to be much more as you continue. The Dom has no character or description or does the sub and expectations are not known.

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