All Comments on 'The Initiation'

Your believable and also so factual. Not all can have the luck of Thomas although many of us can only hope and wish for it.

FY summed it up... very believable, and erotic. It's what I like best about your writing. When I read other authors go on, about the kidnap victim who suddenly is in love and wants seconds because the rapist has a 10 inch penis... it makes me appreciate the finer works such as this on the site even more. Thanks for sharing your work.

Is he headed to the diner at which the waitress Caroline was telling him about works?

Did his pledge brother get the telephone number from Mia?

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This was fun and hot at the same time. I know it's not Ann's style, but this story could easily continue. Thanks for sharing and look forward to your next one!

RNebular

Like several others your story is so believable. Lessons from older females is a dream come true and if it's a totally spontaneous flirtation it's priceless. Well written and paced and as usual coming from a feminine perspective believable.

A fun coming of age story! Thank you!

Nice and sexy. Thanks for sharing.