All Comments on 'The Initiation'

Poor girl...she never knew what hit her!

A very well-written story and highly erotic to boot. I would like to hear more of how Rob continued with Elena's training as a submissive sex slave.

Very good job fungurrl. Now get crackin' on the next chapter!

but not quite. I realize it is fantasy but it isn't plausable IMO. Mental enslavement by fucking her? I want some of those drugs! Nicely written.

Great story - I'm looking forward to part 2, the next morning!!!