All Comments on 'The Inn Ch. 01'

ISW, an interesting clash of genres. You have left Simon in quite a quandary of Quixotic quazy. Also, I enjoyed how you blended in the erotic with the described personalities of your characters.

I am looking forward to the next chapter of "Simon Says Stay Inn".

You're right on the mark ... except that I prefer to spell "qwazy" with a backwards "w"!

A good start to a story already a little different in an intriguing way. I'm interested to see where this goes next.

Thanks for posting it - I look forward to more of the tale.

-Rei

Glad you both like it! I'm hoping to finish up chapter 2 this weekend so that it will post the middle of next week.

Thanks for the encouraging comments!

Material like this is why I've been coming to Lit for nearly a decade now. And such high quality work here, makes me actually want to make an account. Keep it coming, I can't wait to see more, and learn just HOW Simon here plans to fix the mess his arrival caused in his own story.

I'll do my best ... I just submitted chapter 2!

I'm glad you're liking the story, and I'll be pleased as punch if it encourages you to make an account. Come on! It's fun! You get to make up whatever cool screen name you like!

Thanks for the feedback, and I hope you enjoy Simon's plan as it comes together ...

Lots more to come I hope after such great start. Hope he dosnt have to sell his pen!

There's definitely more to come! Chapter 2 should post in a day or two. Chapter 3 is in progress.

I'm having lots of fun with the story so far, which is always good news for productivity.

Glad you like it ... thanks a ton for commenting!

Your story.. your writing style.. I fracken LOVE it!!! Had me cackling with glee and this is just the first chapter!

I'm always proud to provoke a cackle.

Thanks for commenting!

A fun beginning.

asianToy

Thanks! I hope you like the rest of it as well!

I'm hooked, with barely the restraint to say so before jumping to the Next Chapter!

Jason

Fantastic!!

Thanks!

Thank you for writing such a magnificent story!

You're welcome! And thank you for reading and letting me know you liked it!

Oh my Goodness, that escalated quickly! I wasn't so excited for long time, but now, wow!