All Comments on 'The Inn Ch. 04'

by IanSaulWhitcomb

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Hey man, this is the best thing I have ever read on Lit! Please keep them coming.

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombover 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (Hey, man)

Thanks! I'm working as best I can to turn the chapters out regularly, but I'm also trying to make sure I don't rush them and drop the ball.

The encouragement certainly helps!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
the Inn

fun series with entertaining characters and humor. Simon and leyna bounce off each other like friends with benefits, the story itself is very bottleneck in how it is one area yet it expands little by little,with Simon knowing whats going on yet can influence events from afar. Kudos to you for ingenius work

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombover 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (the Inn)

Above all else, I really wanted to make this series fun, so it makes me extremely happy to hear that! Thanks for taking the time to let me know you're enjoying it!

StoneBasherStoneBasherover 8 years ago
Enjoying the story.

Have read other stories of yours and I love the humour you inject into your characters, it humanizes and brings life to them. Looking forward to further chapters.

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombover 8 years agoAuthor
@Stonebasher

If there's a quick way to butter me up, it's complimenting my sense of humor! In fact, I'd try to say something funny right now, but it's late and I'm super-tired. Time to inject my humorous self into bed. Zzzzz...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Keep it up

This is a great story that i hope you keep on writing idk how many great storys are strated an never finshed on this site just thought id tell you that

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (Keep it up)

I have every intention of seeing this one through to the end ... I'm having a lot of fun with it, and I'm pretty sure of where it's headed.

Thanks for reading and letting me know it's going well so far!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Just a reminder...

that this is REALLY hawt!!

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (Just a reminder)

Thanks! I have a bad memory, so reminders are always welcome!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
great!

I very much like this plot and the way you are telling it ...

Thank you very much!

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombover 7 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (great!):

Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy the rest just as much!

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 6 years ago
LOL funny and yet

achingly hot and yet still more enchantingly... romantic?

Whatever, it's fun!

Jason

KnightofmindKnightofmind14 days ago

Man. She must have the same enchantment upon her lips as that upon the feed larder to have elicited so illicit a response in what came across as little time.

One must admire a skilled laborer, even at play.

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Update 04/21/20: The e-book version of The Inn releases this Friday and can be pre-ordered now! For more details, see my Twitter at @coolgasmic! Thank you all very much for all the support and positive feedback! I really do appreciate it more than I can say. Bio: I blog, I...

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