All Comments on 'The Inn Ch. 05'

This tale is fantastic and I can't wait for more! =D

Thank you! I'm hard at work on chapter 6 ...

keep them cumming can't wait for what's next for Simon and his Inn adventures , so we'll what his new clientele will bring next chapter.

Life has slowed me down a bit on Chapter 6, but it's on its way, I promise! Thanks for the encouraging words and high praise!

Really impressed. Your sex scenes are amazing, but I'm actually feeling invested in the characters too. I can't wait to read more!

Thanks for appreciating both the characters and the sex! For me to feel like I've succeeded as a writer, I really have to be satisfied that I've pulled off both the characters and the action, so comments like yours really give me the sense that I'm on the right track. It's important to me that readers find everyone to be an interesting person, whether it's our main characters or minor ones like Kurga or Kizaah or Galufrand.

Another story of yours that's dragged me in and tied me to the screen :p

I know I'm being a bit selfish, but please tell me that it turns out in the end that the main party survived. Juliette seems far too much of a nice character to die to such a weird quirk of fate :(

Well, you know, if I always write stories where everything turns out happily ever after for everyone, don't you think people will start to find that too predictable? I mean, you already seem to be taking it for granted that Simon and Leyna won't end up being buggered to death by a gang of Necromanata's orcs and ghouls ...

What I will say is, having Juliette die off-camera and never reappear would be a pretty unsatisfying loose end, now that you mention it. So either I have DO something in mind for later ... or I just plain didn't think that first chapter through very well.

; )

You not fully think out something? Nah :p

I choose to assume this means you have a long, probably tricksie plot in mind. Much more interesting idea.

Slightly less spoilery... is there going to be an explanation of how/why he got there (and along with a paradox get out or not), or should we not worry about it? Both work, I'm just incredibly nosey ^_^

Would it ruin too much of the magic to admit that I have a big spreadsheet of all the letters Simon's writing and when they'll get where they're going?

As to the mystery of our hero's transportation into Phaeland, I'm not sure how much detail I'll get into, but I will point out that he's used that fountain pen to write well over a hundred pages without any mention of refilling it.

Oh my Goddess, it's a magical macguffin! OK, I have to admit to being suspicious of the pen just on the grounds of Chekhov's Gun but I hadn't thought of the ink aspect.

A spreadsheet, huh? Guess that's a pretty sensible way to track them, yeah.

If you introduce a gun in the first act, someone has to use it to blow up the nuclear wessels in the third act?

Only if you're in Alameda, but close enough :p

I'm still trying to figure that last comment out. Maybe the problem is that I just don't remember the Alameda.

The nuclear wessels were at Alameda Naval Base iirc

Haha, that was a pun, not an actual memory lapse. "Remember the Alameda." In hindsight, maybe even worse than my usual puns.

I'm wondering if I'm going to learn something new every chapter :D

J

I view myself as an educator. This is all written in public service!

Corn chips? Corn chips..... You know what? Sure. Corn chips.