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HeisenhugHeisenhugalmost 8 years ago

Well there's something you don't see every day... I'm a tiny bit jealous actually.

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@Heisenhug

Me too!

: )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Exotic

Exotic to the extreme. I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
FUN AT THE INN

A magical sexy threesome never imagined you 'd a centauress in mix still fun for simon and leyna still is a quite strange sex scene for me to understand but good none the the less. Have thought of putting leyna in a gangbang with simon involved it just another suggestion. considering you have to 2 chapters left in the story hope you finish it with a big bang

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (Exotic)

Occasionally I go kind of crazy! Not quite as crazy this time as when I wrote IMAGCASM, but I'll probably never top that one.

Thanks for the compliment!

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (FUN AT THE INN)

Hmm. A gangbang? I'd have to get pretty creative to figure out how to make that work. On the other hand, Simon would probably be entertainingly uncomfortable in those circumstances, so it's worth thinking about!

Glad you liked the chapter ... I'm definitely trying to put together a big finish!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

dont know why he'd be fine with her getting fucked multiple times a day by fat sweaty strangers and yet he is somehow troubled with fucking other women. doesnt make sense

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombalmost 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous

Love does strange things to people!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great bra

Enjoyed it big time

Only point of criticism making it 4, 9 / 5 stars is that it is disappointing Leyna has no black magic "inside" her! I have not read further than ch 12 so far but I hope this legman was only lying in order to safe their love or sth. Wouldnt fit the story otherwise: Like what would would legitimate her role in the war if not her origin...

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IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombover 7 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (Great bra)

Thank you! Hopefully, the last couple of chapters will do a good job of making clear where Leyna fits in the grand scheme of things ... : )

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Doh!

A doe with antlers? Face palm! 🤦🏻‍♂️

IanSaulWhitcombIanSaulWhitcombabout 7 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous (Doh!)

Hey, if *you* could magically shapechange into a human/deer hybrid, wouldn't you want a kick-ass set of antlers?

JasonRTaylorJasonRTaylorover 6 years ago
Not all female deer have antlers... but some Do!

That trivial pissyness aside, you really do like so have Simon fuck for every step forward in the plot, don't you? :D

*shakes head laughing*

J

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