All Comments on 'The Inn Ch. 14'

what a surprising twist in the story with the mother and daughter reunion. what about the magic pen and how to properly use it. Simon wanting to stay despite having a inadvertently a way out discovering last minute. Now I thought we were ending the story with 14 chapters, how many chapters have you got left to add to it, cause of that cliffhanger. As long as you finish it at your own pace, guess there still some fun left be had with Simon and leyna. Cheers!

So when the mistress said 'a life to disturb the dead!' Was she this serious about her mother being awakened from the dead or it's some sort of other necromancer magic which kept her alive to guard that brooch or whatever other plan the necromanata has got?

WP

The farther I got into this chapter, the more I realized that there were two choices: make it a super-long chapter that wrapped everything up, which would mean posting it at least a week later, or split it in two and go to a 15th chapter.

At this point, I'm planning to wrap up next chapter. Unfortunately, I had to take an out-of-town trip this week unexpectedly, and I haven't made as much progress as I would like. I suppose it's possible that as I write further into Ch. 15, I may find it running long as well and go to a 16th chapter, but I'll be surprised if that's the case.

Thanks for your patience!

More will be revealed in Chapter 15!

I will say, though, that Lismada already admitted to being overdramatic. So maybe she was just trying to throw Simon off-balance so he'd be relieved about taking her deal ... : )

Your 4.9+ stars would translate into a New York times best Seller.

Whereas the 4.9 stars in other categories would have trouble getting published on the back pages of Penthouse.

Thanks! Now if I could just translate that star rating into an actual NYT bestseller, I'll be set!

: D

Excellent development, really caught me off guard and brings me to a new appreciation for fantasy, especially the way the characters interact in ways that make complete sense, but I'd not expected.

J