All Comments on 'The Inn Pt. 02'

Very nice. Looking forward to more.

Love it and the possibilities this story has for change and ridiculous situations

Great start. Lots of potential. Can't wait.

Sorry if the next part is taking a while. I had to deal with some stuff at home. I also just started my new term at school. I have been working on the story in my head and I have more ideas for the next installment. The story won't let me wait too long to get it out.

I actually am not happy with how this story was coming together. It was written quickly and I have painted me into a corner with it. I've been slowly working on a complete re-write of the story idea--hell, let's just call it a new story--that I hope will be far better. It does pay to take some time writing these stories. lol

Anyhow, I have been working on the new series: The Exile as a replacement for these stories. I have also been playing with the idea of writing a few stories based on the Talislanta RPG mythos which may be submitted in-between the Exile episodes.

I have been busy with school so this does slow me down but I have been working on small sections of the new Exile series. It will come out but I cannot give a definite time-line of release.

Never fear, I'm still writing. I just taking some time in order to submit better quality stuff.

-The Smokin' Deist