All Comments on 'The Instruction of Sarah'

What the heck was that???

ok I'm going to be fair...you tried...truly tried I'm sure...but erotic writing is not for you I don't think...this isn't bible class and folk around here won't be kind

Looking for more as this story developes.

Pretty sick.

Needs a victim with the IQ of a duck for this to work.

stories they hate but read them all anyway!!! He even said it, they have an IQ of a duck! Great comparison ass wipe. And when you send me personal hate e-mail why not leave your name and address instead of staying unknown. Are you such a punk a scared little rat fuck? I have friends all over the country boy I might know or find out where you live and be waiting for you punk ass.

You are on to something here RelDom. The Bible's full of ideas for really hot pornography. As you know Abraham had a lot of trouble knocking Sarah up and at her suggestion started fucking Hagar who responded very well. That could be the basis of your next story.