by emlynley
Your story flow and continuity much better than your first story. Keep the juices flowing and give us more.
I so would like an interview like this , the ones I have had are so boring. Great work, the sex was fabulous u combined hot sex and love very well. Hope to see more from u...
This remarkable love story combines OOH HOT SEX with the smiles of a silly but oh! so serious game. They are truly lucky men. And long may they wave! The author has packed a whole lot (and I don't mean the oversized cock) in a concise tale.
I like these kinds of role playing stories, it adds spice to the sex and fun to the read. Shame you've only written two stories.