by Midday_Crisis
This is a great start to an interesting story. Please continue and expand the story line.
Really?
Ex-wife divorces him for greener grass, then comes back years later and takes him to the cleaners. And he's still talking to her.
Sorry, stopped at that point.
You don't think we should take this seriously? It's a good tale, better that a bunch that are supposed to be real stories. I agree with Anonymous, it's the start of a good story line. Keep it going.
The only shaky part was he ex and new hubby going after him for more money years later, should have shortened the time between the divorce and his success.
Though still divorce lawyers etc. probably do think that way.
This could go on, it's a good start.
Good storyline, keep developing the characters and bring the ex into the plot
Apparently none of the other commenters read your disclaimer at the beginning.
I loved your story and can truly understand the revenge sexual relationship.
What a story you tell. Who is the male lead? Roger Moore, Pierce Brosnan, Sean Connery? Maybe too rough? Sexier maybe? Too many rising women to think of! This is a rom-com with more possibility than I have ever seen - a tongue in cheek romp. Beautiful available women who know how to get ahead - even a great secretary to light up the screen. Someone has missed something by not getting millions for this story. I will dream for many nights about what has been left unsaid and not quite visualized in this already spectacular tale.
Maybe not your cup of tea, but still a great fit - Woody Allen could do this next year.
Feels a bit incomplete leaving things here. Would love to see the revenge play out, and them getting a happy ending afterwards.