by Jokx60
if someone started to act that way with me, I would have stood up to her and not just sat there and take it
I couldn't wait to read part 2! I really love the more "realistic" characters and background (e.g. Maggie).
I think the story and format have potential.
The format let's the reader take the position of the interviewer, which is quite compelling.
The problem at the moment is that the the interviewer isn't asking quite the right question.
I liked the format and had a good idea of the dynamic and prefered to a first person story style.
Please continue.
Not a big fan of the format. Seems stilted and we have little idea of what's going on in her head. Or at least that's my feeling.