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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
writing needs a lot help

Begin by reading your story slowly, line by line. Missed letters and words aplenty.

Chez longue makes no sense. Try chaise longue.

Writing needs serious help. And in trying to be erotic, you introduce physiological impossibilities.

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