All Comments on 'The Investigation Ch. 04'

You have a great story going, please don’t bring in any more characters. You made Liz and Harry seem really happy, please, no more people into the story to mess it up. Even though you got Jesse in the story you should send her out on a special job by herself and while working she can find her great love like Harry and Liz, that will give you a way to write another story without screwing upHarry and Liz.

Great story and even a happy ending. Thank you.

Read the whole thing through and couldn’t wait to see what happened next with each chapter. Great job and thank you so much for sharing.

H, you have clearly put great effort and compassion into this story and it works nicely! The characters have a style of realism that feels "honest" for fiction.

Nice. VERY nice!!

Great story, any chance of you continuing this one?

Well done, really enjoyed it