All Comments on 'The Invitation'

What a load of crap!

Thanks for the story.

Loved the story, different in a good way thanks.

But you really need to get this to an editor. There are numerous spelling errors and words in the middle of a sentence that just don't make any sense. "FEASTS", was used twice in place of what you meant, "Fists".

I love this story! I hope you continue it.

Wow I hope there is more to this good story so far!