by Belly_Up
well written and engaging, I thought it was great, I wonder though that it might not get many reads because it is in romance. I'm thinking it would be read more in mature or erotic couplings.
Your story was so sweet and you made it seem like they really cared about eachother instead if just the girl being unlovable and slutty, thanks for that! It seems like they really want more than just sex while I enjoy a story like that 100% better than just it all being about sex. Wonderful plot development and character interaction so it was original!!! I want to read more please!