by Lisa Summers
How come I never get arrested by a female officer? All that creaking leather and authority on the outside, all that soft yum on the inside; sounds like some sort of heavenly candy bar hehe. Then again, I like female EMTs too. I feel faint...ohh....lol
Hy Lisa I think you have a Great story there I will give you a score of 100points for it shows that your trying come out in the story i can feel you keep up the great writing ok.
Pat Murray
There is lots of conflict in your story that seems to be brushed over. The one quote from your story that jumped out at me"i couldn't allow a woman to be arrested for being sexual". She said that while on a prostitute/John sting. Laughed my ass off,