All Comments on 'The Itch Pt. 01'

another chapter or 3

We desperatly need more satire stories like this one, alreday looking forward to future chapetrs!

5*

The story is a bit cliché, with the two broken hands and all, but so are 90% of stories on lit. It's​ well written and your taking your time with it, which is good. Keep going and I will keep reading.

He will nail his sister, sounds as if she is ripe for breeding, very good start, another chapter, please don't slut the sister, this should be the beginning of a long term relationship, no sharing of sister or brother, maybe mom can join in, help enlarge the family, 5 STARS for a good 1st chapter, and more to come !!!

Thanks Mr NL .....

Hope this is like 10 part series and his mother and doctor join in too

Would love to have sister mother and doctor all fuck and suck him crazy

Nice start! Got me up, need more to finish with please!

Sister needs to be the first, then doctor on a check up, then mom

Hopefully, his sister thinks about it and gets so aroused, she'll want to jerk him off then ride him. She will probably offer to help him again and after he is healed; will blow him and screw him a lot. Hopefully, she'll take her top and bra off to make him feel better. So much potential. Thanks.

Need chapter 2

For an older sister, she's a real twit!

another story that probably won't get completed

Needs more to the story, another chapter but not one that is rushed with just a pagebthen its finished, Tim needs to tease his sister, work on her to jack him off followed by oral then the fuck, and so a goid 3 pages required.

My only other thing being is the statement of "Sandy turning back for a last glance, it must have been a foot long". NO WAY IS IT A FOOT LONG, COME ON BE MORE REALISTIC AND MAKE IT 8/9" perhaps but not a foot.

Nice story and very original, please keep on.

I read good stories then nothing. It's been over 4 years since your last comment, what's up? You have people who follow your work, where do we go to find the rest?

yet another who vanished?