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All Comments on 'The Ith'

by Dingus Guy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Good idea.. but..

It was a good idea, but inconsistencies in grammar irritated me. Also, a prologue is what comes at the beginning of a story, this seems to be an epilogue. Poor ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ending

Finish it

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