by dlake
Thanks for the comment! I'm going to set aside more time in the next few months to finally finish up this story. I've had it all planned out for quite some time now. I just need to flesh it out and make sure it's satisfying. I do appreciate the feedback though. It's hard to tell what i'm doing right, what people like, etc. So, your feedback is very much appreciated.
I misspelled a word near the end. After they cum on her, as they are watching her, it should have read, "Writhing on the floor, her fingers slid over her body, mixing their seed, bringing it to her lips, spreading it all over." Writhing, not writing. Sorry about that!
I think they should do more (I mean Brent and James) with each other (more than only jacking off together).
Thanks for the comments. I'm working on finishing this at the moment. I hope to have it done soon. I appreciate the input, I'm sure you all will be pleased where this story goes.
At the beginning of Part 7, the line, ""Fuck, you guys. I am so horny. You probably think I'm a total slut." is said by Allison. Sorry.
Also, I'm writing the next installment as we speak. Thanks!
Please have the guys jack each other for at least one of the girls, would be even hotter if they tasted and sucked each other too
Really enjoying this storyline. Love the mixing of straight and gay tones. Looking forward to more. Soon?
Good series if your looking for sex. Good girls amd boys. Jennie your time will come and come, I had hoped you would be discovered
Very good series,have read all of them and hope you continue your writings.I like these open stories and personally think there is lots of this going on,although I was never that lucky in my days.I do enjoy jacking off reading them...keep up the good work!
Going great! Love the progression of the story line and the graphic descriptions of the hot physical bodies and sexual experiences. Hot hot hot!