All Comments on 'James Gang Ch. 02: The James Girls'

I loved every word of it.

High praise from someone whose stories I also enjoy a great deal.

I appreciate it. :)

While there were a great deal of grammatical errors, the story itself more than made up for it. I thought it was a wonderfully written story indeed!

Thanks for your great father daughter tale, well written and fund reading. More please.

Such as not saying the name of Darbie's 4th child and spelling, but other than that I loved it. 8/10

Again I love this story. I hope you find the time to keep writing and posting on here.

couldn't finish the first page it was so boring it read like an outline or movie script not a story. would have been better left unposted

I liked it but it was really slow to get going. A lot was just recap. Still though, a 5, like all your stories.

Anon 1/3/12 doesn't know what s/he is talking about! The only down side was the sad ending. I actually choked up reading it. But it didn't ruin the story, just made it sad.

HE DIDN'T DIE A SAD AND BROKEN MAN. HE HAD BEEN HEALED AND LOVED. NO ONE CAN ASK FOR MORE AS THEY DEPART THIS LIFE. DEATH IS THE LAST PHASE OF OUR LIFE, AND HOW IT ENDS WE HOPE IS WITH GOOD MEMORIES. AND HAVING 2 MORE REASON TO DIE HAPPY, YOU HIT IT SO PERFECT. THANK YOU.

Amazing story, the end brought tears to my eyes, thank you

Looking into our own lives, we seldom want to reviel what's lying there for every one to see if they just look hard enough. I wanted to say so much more but I havent got my thoughts together just yet the way I'd like them to be ,so as to explain what I want to get accross, thanks