All Comments on 'The Jenny File'

I loved it. I loved the unique manner of telling the story, the flow of the words and the original situation. Great job!

What a tease! I hope there's more to come on this.

You have just started on a good story so keep it going. Thanks

Can't wait for more of this story. It was a perfect cliffhanger.

very much enjoy the unique narrative. I do hope you continue. How about from the Billy narrative, then back n forth.. Perhaps he knew she'd find the folder and set the bait for his trap in hopes she'd find and feel similarly. Just my wasted cents there.

I hope there is a part 2 may be from his point of view. As he knows hes caught, and the fantasy becomes reality.

and very well written.

There should be a sequel--and soon.

This story was great, and in my opinion begs a sequel! Maybe include the story she wrote? Would give a nice excuse to describe him as well.

Good story but needs a sequel. Would be really interesting, especially when he reads what his sister wrote.