All Comments on 'The Jewel Plug'

by RRVaroque

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Beautiful

This story was beautiful, especially for a first. The plot of a baby girl getting caught, and getting punished while being rewarded. Your word choice was excellent and I’m really looking forward to seeing more from you, please continue writing. You seem to do lovely at it! Fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

need more pictures

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