All Comments on 'The Jewelry Boxes'

This is my first story I posted. Should I do more? Suggestions?

That was hot. You should write more...

Made me excited an I wasn't in the story completely. I was getting excited as I kept reading into it. Very exciting an erotic this story is. I could Defintly read more like this.

You got the stuff! You definitely need to write more. I can't wait to read another

This was super hot and I could read over and over again!

I can only hope this happens to me. I could read this over and over, just to produce a steam in my pants .

Did anyone else need to sit back and take a breather for a bit after reading this? 'Cause I sure did! My heart is still racing...and...of course I'm a little wet. Nice job.