All Comments on 'The Joanne Saga - Joanne'

Phenomenal introduction!! Love Joanne and the potential this saga could have

Would love to see a BBW type story at some point. Keep it up

Why is this in Mature....

Sorry dude. I read the first two paragraphs and quit. The first sentence doesn't make any sense and by the second paragraph, I couldn't get past the multiple tenses you used in the same paragraph. There are lots of editors in the website who would have been willing to help you square away the mess.