All Comments on 'The Job'

...please.

...please.

Wasn't too bad.. But in the beginning it took forever for me to realize what the job even was...

Hope there is a part 2 soon!

Please give us more.. She so obviously needs to be trained..

And we so obviously want to read about it

Just the right mix of reluctant tension and sensuality - the way only over-30 women can make it. I hope this gorgeous couple has more to tell us.

hope to see more soon

You have to finish this, you can't leave it there,

VERY well done! I am a guy who just clicked on this story out of idle curiosity, then found it to be tantalizing. One way it might have been even better would have been to be even more descriptive; maybe more dialog? Another would have been to end it, perhaps what each mind was saying as they lingered over a genuine, but awkward,good-bye. My opinions are like every ones; just opinions, and NOT to be the way the author saw this genuine account. Thanks, nicely done and very interesting.