All Comments on 'The Jock and the Virgin'

That was a great story you wrote about Dave and Sarah. I liked the way you describe Dave at the beginning of the story as being a sex Jock and only thinking with his little head. I liked how he meets Sarah and how their relationship develops over time to where he takes her virginity and the fallen love with each other. I would like to see another chapter if you have time about them.

that was really awesome. I liked the romance in it. you should make another chapter.

this reminds me of my first time as well.. the curiosity, the questions, the fear, the exploration... good thing is my partner then was just as patient.... really loved this, and i agree you should write another chapter! i want to see where this goes:)

A very well done story comma and I'd like to read more from you. You did a very good job with this.